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Your Love Is My Pain

Your smile like razors your kiss like knives im drowning in your love as i struggle to stay alive i promised not to slice and i still continue to do my part but the cutts arnt on my arm the cutts are on my heart i didnt put them there my hearts painted black from the darkness that it drains it overlaps my loving heart as your love becomes my pain as i bleed the pain in blood my heart begins to flood its all gone with the sin it leaked out through the scars that are reopened once again. -Spencer Coggsdale dedicated to Luis Arizpe

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Date: 5/6/2016 2:42:00 AM
SPENCER, this is an awesome poem, thank you for sharing. ** SKAT
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Date: 4/22/2016 11:45:00 AM
Spencer, nicely penned. Glad to read your poem today. Luv ~LINDA~
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Date: 1/23/2011 2:31:00 AM
Very good. :) Take care & Keep writing. <3 Kaci Jo
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Date: 1/21/2011 8:40:00 AM
Welcome to Poetry Soup.. so enjoyed reading your poetry tonight with it's creative theme.. hope your time on Soup will be fun and filled with sharing.. check out our contests too...good luck with luv..
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Date: 1/20/2011 8:14:00 PM
very good my friend very deep
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Date: 1/20/2011 4:16:00 AM
Very deep and dark. I like it. It reminds me of a place I have been before. Good luck with your writing :)
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Date: 1/20/2011 3:45:00 AM
I would like to welcome you to PoetrySoup Spencer. Wishing you the best in your writing endeavors this year. You can look to the left side of the main page and find lots of information about PoetrySoup. If you don't find what you are looking for ask any poet here. Everyone is willing to help. Love, Carol
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