Spencer Coggsdale Poet Rhyme

Your Love Is My Pain

Your smile like razors
your kiss like knives
im drowning in your love
as i struggle to stay alive
i promised not to slice
and i still continue to do my part
but the cutts arnt on my arm
the cutts are on my heart
i didnt put them there
my hearts painted black from 
the darkness that it drains
it overlaps my loving heart  
as your love becomes my pain
as i bleed the pain in blood 
my heart begins to flood
its all gone with the sin
it leaked out through the scars
that are reopened once again.


-Spencer Coggsdale     dedicated to Luis Arizpe

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Skat A May 6, 2016 at 2:42 AM SPENCER, this is an awesome poem, thank you for sharing. ** SKAT

Poet Destroyer A April 22, 2016 at 11:45 AM Spencer, nicely penned. Glad to read your poem today. Luv ~LINDA~

Kaci Jo Atteberry January 23, 2011 at 2:31 AM Very good. :) Take care & Keep writing. <3 Kaci Jo

Linda-Marie Sweetheart January 21, 2011 at 8:40 AM Welcome to Poetry Soup.. so enjoyed reading your poetry tonight with it's creative theme.. hope your time on Soup will be fun and filled with sharing.. check out our contests too...good luck with luv..

Duncan Chappell January 20, 2011 at 8:14 PM very good my friend very deep

Natasha Gillen January 20, 2011 at 4:16 AM Very deep and dark. I like it. It reminds me of a place I have been before. Good luck with your writing :)

Carol Sunshine Brown January 20, 2011 at 3:45 AM I would like to welcome you to PoetrySoup Spencer. Wishing you the best in your writing endeavors this year. You can look to the left side of the main page and find lots of information about PoetrySoup. If you don't find what you are looking for ask any poet here. Everyone is willing to help. Love, Carol