Your Love

Your love is like the wind blowing through my hair Your love is like a child born without a care Your love is like your face so sensitive yet strong Your love is what I'm hoping for to last my whole life long Your love is like the sea rushing to the shore Your love is what I need more and more Your love can make me laugh your love can make me cry Your love makes me never want to say goodbye These things come from the heart and they need never part I'll always think strongly of your precious love

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Mahtab Bangalee

Date: 3/25/2019 3:35:00 AM

All through the love has prevailed; it's a beautiful // lovely poem

Wendy Rycroft

Date: 3/4/2017 2:30:00 PM

Beautiful x

John Posey

Date: 9/1/2013 10:22:00 AM

Gwen, this is a title we share. Read my poem, "Your Love" and you will see we write with the same pen sometimes.... I hope you enjoy mine as much as I yours... Love ya dearly..... Jake

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 11/21/2012 9:17:00 PM

Gwen,, Stopping by to greet you and every other soup poet, with a special thank you comment, during this wonderful Thanksgiving season. Hope you do not mind the time I am taking to express my sincere appreciation for any support you have offered during the years, or time you have been here on the soup. I am deeply thankful and extend to you my best wishes for a happy and healthy Poetic Magical Thanksgiving Day. *Always & Forever, the Poet Destroyer; -*

Gwen Benita Mason Gibbs
Date: 11/23/2012 8:24:00 AM

Thank you for your well wishes, and same to you, I hope that your Thanksgiving was a blessed one.

John Posey

Date: 11/11/2012 11:51:00 AM

Many words are written about love... you chose the right ones for this magnificent poem. Great job... I look forward to reading more.... Jake

Gwen Benita Mason Gibbs
Date: 3/5/2013 5:45:00 PM

Thanks for the comment John

Rachel St.Cross

Date: 10/28/2012 6:08:00 PM

‡ Wow, Sooo Soft Sweet Sincere And Beautiful, Sweet Beautiful Gwen. I Beheld Your Beautiful In Com Thought I Would Stop And I Love Beautiful Love So I Came Find, 'Your Love.' Tis Easy To Express Love From One's Deepest. Your Beauty Did It Perfectly. I Shall Favour This Treasure. Wonderful, To Be Loved Sooo Deeply. My Love, Rachel *

Gwen Benita Mason Gibbs
Date: 3/5/2013 5:46:00 PM

I appreciate your fomments

Gwen Benita Mason Gibbs
Date: 3/5/2013 5:46:00 PM

I meant comments

John Rhinem

Date: 3/8/2012 3:47:00 PM

Smile ~ Very Beautiful This Love * Love Always, John!:) ~

Gwen Benita Mason Gibbs
Date: 3/5/2013 5:47:00 PM

Thanks