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Girl your love is like the leaves that cling to the branches of a tree the stem of my heart that will never be rooted up, the grass-root stuck beneath my love you are my companion, my soulmate, my friend, the girl of my life and my future wife you are the words written in my poetry, the lyrics to my tune, my everlasting fortune We are like birds that reside in their nest and the breeze that moves through the night, you are the pleasure in me the emerald of my heart that will never depart, and the love that will never stay apart The two of us together when combine makes one a love that signifies the best, a gold that we have both won you will always remain apart of me, in my love, in my heart. Demeter Edwards

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 3/10/2012 2:00:00 PM
Good One. Congrats on the competition
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Date: 1/11/2012 5:34:00 AM
Congratulations on the win in Brian's "Show Me" contest Demeter. Love, Carol
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Date: 1/10/2012 10:41:00 PM
Congratulations on your win Demeter
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Date: 1/10/2012 6:57:00 PM
CONGRATS DEMETER ON THIRD PLACE WIN FOR EXCELLENT ENTRY ..
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Date: 12/19/2011 8:21:00 AM
Congratulations on your excellent poetry being featured this week Demeter. I hope to see you as a premium member in the new year. Love, Carol
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Date: 11/9/2011 7:30:00 AM
this is lovely. a truely wonderful tribute to the one you love. I so envy her. :)
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Date: 11/9/2011 5:11:00 AM
A warm welcome to PoetrySoup I offer to you Demeter. I wish for you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. May you find inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets. Read and comment on their's and they will return in kind. May the sun shine on you that you might find great joy in your life. Love and blessing always, Carol
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Date: 11/8/2011 12:40:00 PM
So romantic,and full of positive energy,I can feel the vibe,and motion that is inspiring you,to write to your true love,wow........Please kip up good work I would love to read more of your work,Ivy
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