Your Lacustrine Beauty

YOUR LACUSTRINE BEAUTY
In the wasteland the tormented life made me make The repentance wander in the wild conceding the mistake The nimbus clouds hovered overhead but I couldn’t take The rains, they dried making a desert for me in the wake Until you came, created an oasis where you became a lake. You made in my deep depression torrents of fluid joy to flow In your tranquil depths you drowned my deranged sorrow The breeze on face made ripples of smile in a charming show Flooded by sunshine my dancing reflection I see on you glow. In your sensuous serenity you dissolve my somber sky’s blue I see all the hues of my twilight colors gleam in glory on you Where the flight of ecstasy takes me then you don’t have clue. If the drought of distress desiccates your desolate floor dry My tears would flow to your core to fill you with love, I’d try. For I don’t want to see the lacustrine beauty you ever lose. When the squalls of tough times would give my life a shake I’d sink within your placid water, still as the cosmos, below Discover the bliss in me your aquatic touch would grow anew On dreamy nights on the arms of your moonlit shore I’d lie Drenched, I’d soak you deep within, keep in my heart close.
January 28, 2018. Contest : Minuanetta.

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Date: 1/8/2019 10:43:00 PM
Congrats on your win, Subimal.
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Date: 4/29/2018 3:51:00 PM
So beautifully written, Subimal. Congratulations on your well-deserved podium win. Hugs, Sandra
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Subimal Sinha-Roy
Date: 4/30/2018 12:14:00 AM
Thank you, Sandra.
Date: 4/29/2018 1:41:00 PM
This is SO unusual and breathtaking, Subimal, and is so full of extraordinary imagery and tender consideration ... it is a sweet piece of candy that slowly dissolves in your conscience into a beautiful whole! Just adored this write! Congratulations on your placement, and thank you for entering my contest! :-)
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Date: 4/30/2018 12:14:00 AM
Thank you so much, Greg for the placement.
Date: 4/29/2018 8:50:00 AM
So beautiful! Congratulations on your win! This imagery is compelling. Enjoyed.
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Date: 4/29/2018 8:01:00 AM
Beautiful, Subimal. Congrats on your win.
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Date: 4/29/2018 8:00:00 AM
Beautiful, Subimal. Congraats on your win.
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Date: 4/30/2018 12:13:00 AM
Thank you, Line.
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