Brian Cosgrove Poet Rhyme

Your Kiss From Heavan

Your Kiss from Heavan

               Daddy how do I catch a raindrop
               When the rain just won't stop
               How do I catch moonbeams
               When nothing is there it seems
               How do I catch today Daddy
               And put it in a bottle
               Darling, no-one can catch time 
               And put it in a bottle
               Moonbeams are the memories
               Forever in your dreams
               Raindrops are your Kiss from Heavan
               That gives you Gods own seal
               That Rainbows are the promise
               And memories are for real

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Poet Destroyer A September 18, 2013 at 8:03 PM Brian, awe.. a late and nice sweet Welcome to poetry soup... It's an honor meeting you all over again. Looking forward in following you and your poetry. Glad you are enjoying the community.. xox~ Linda

Poet Destroyer A September 14, 2013 at 7:31 PM Brian, CONGRATULATIONS, on having your poem FEATURED on the soups Home Page:-). Good-Night **Linda** Brian Cosgrove September 18, 2013 at 5:37 PM Hi Linda Good to hear from you joining has been fun Brian

Gordon Mcconnell September 10, 2013 at 9:34 AM excellent write Brian, really enjoyed reading this, well done and greetings from Scotland, have blessed day, Gordon Brian Cosgrove September 10, 2013 at 11:24 PM Hi Gordon, Now theres a fine Scottish name I am a kiwi with a scottish background Thanks for your comments

John Posey September 8, 2013 at 4:59 PM Brian, my friend, you have posted a beautifully written poem. I think you will gather many fans here on the SOUP. I really enjoyed this one.... Write on, friend, write on...Jake

Anne-Lise Andresen September 3, 2013 at 3:01 AM Welcome to P-Soup, Brian ! - Nice to read your first poem here. - Hope you will have much pleasure to be with us. - Wishing you good luck - have a nice day! - Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours. - My first greeting to you from Norway / / / Anne-Lise :) Brian Cosgrove September 4, 2013 at 5:42 PM Hi Anne I like the Mountains and the snow In New Zealand we have wonderful fiords Thanks

Mustapha Mohammed September 3, 2013 at 2:37 AM Very powerful ending Brian. The last two lines really did it for me. Brian Cosgrove September 4, 2013 at 5:48 PM Hi Mustapha Thank you I like a strong ending too

Dr.Ram Mehta September 2, 2013 at 11:35 PM I enjoyed the last two lines- very meANINGFUL Brian Cosgrove September 4, 2013 at 5:45 PM Hi Ram Thank you for your comments I like to live my poems

Skat A September 2, 2013 at 10:39 PM hi Brian, this is nice and real, Your first poem on the soup is excellent for the readers, I love it!! Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. Wishing you the best when it comes to your poems. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you like. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND". Hugs* Skat * Brian Cosgrove September 4, 2013 at 5:39 PM Hi Skate Thankyou for your welcome I do feel like a Stranger ina Strange land Negotiating the site is not easy How do I post my works on line I typed in the first one I am a Kiwi living in Australia My passion come from my years of Deer Hunting in the Mountains of NZ A love of nature and the wild No more hunting at near 80 But the love remains Kindest Regards Brian