Your Hypnotic Eyes

In the sky I saw your face
In my mind I reached out to touch it
But when I opened my eyes
My hand was so far away from you
your smiled,and your face, faded,
and I smiled.
Closed my eyes once more,
to see your hypnotic eyes 
drew portrait of you,
in a breath
and felt the breeze brush over me
again and again.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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November 21, 2012 at 10:18 PM
IVY,, Stopping by to greet you and every other soup poet, with a special thank you comment, during this wonderful Thanksgiving season. Hope you do not mind the time I am taking to express my sincere appreciation for any support you have offered during the years, or time you have been here on the soup. I am deeply thankful and extend to you my best wishes for a happy and healthy Poetic Magical Thanksgiving Day. *Always & Forever, the Poet Destroyer; -*
Kearley Avatar
November 11, 2012 at 12:38 PM
That is beautiful! :o) I smiled...
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September 24, 2012 at 1:24 PM
Ahhh..So romantic but yet sad..Enjoyed reading this afternoon...Sara
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