Your Hourglass Of Time

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Written, May 22, 2025
For The Contest, “Your Choice L”
Sponsor, Brian Strand

2nd Place




Time flows so quickly
grains tumbling in
small measures
shifting sweet
rhythms of
life. Keep
the pace
and flow
since time
is too short-
turn it again 
gather blessings
flowing to achieve
your great finish line

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CayCay Jennings

Date: 5/23/2025 5:07:00 PM

Beautiful, Sandra, no 'coloring' necessary, no spices other than the color of words. I hope you are well, that your body follows every dictate of your mind. Send you positive thoughts every now and then. I don't want you to ever leave Soup, ok? CayCay