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Nov. 4, 2024        5.30am

Jack and jill nursery rhymes hi-res stock photography and ...

Some call me Jill, a jealous kid I write rhymes for you to read I’m Jack’s bosom friend Our friendship has no end. I’m not jealous at all I save him in every fall Like the incident on the hill I’m strong to work on a treadmill. I always remind Jack to be nimble With smiles showing my dimple I go with his wife once in a while To share my healthy life’s style. I give him pie every Christmas And say, "You are loved by Jesus" While pulling its plum with joy He says, "Jesus, I’m a good boy."

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Date: 11/22/2024 7:13:00 PM
Jill Nursery Rhyme Contest Judged: 11/18/2024 1:26:00 AM Sponsored by: Charles Messina Place 3 (up to 4th multi-w)
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Date: 11/18/2024 12:50:00 PM
Back with Congratulations on your win. I enjoyed reading your wonderful write again. Hugs... Have a fun day with your win as you write away..................
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Len Gasun
Date: 11/22/2024 7:14:00 PM
Thank you so much my dearest poet friend Paula for reading and enjoying my poem once again and especially your heartfelt congratulatory greetings. My big congratulations on your wins too. I'll be back later/soon to read again from you. Abundant blessings always. Hugs
Date: 11/5/2024 9:34:00 PM
You are a natural with rhymes and the flow of your words here is seamless dear poetic soul, i love what youv done with the prompt and theme and how youv delivered such a cute poem: I especially love the treadmill line: so clever. Pleasure reading this~ best wishes for the contest: sending you light always
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Len Gasun
Date: 11/10/2024 4:58:00 AM
Thank you so much for reading my poem and your uplifting words my dear poet friend Ink. Yes, free verse is difficult for me dear. Thank you so much for your best wishes too and the light. Sending back lovingly to you. Hugs
Date: 11/4/2024 1:01:00 PM
I enjoyed reading your wonderful write. What a Great Picture/Ending you have here. "Good Luck" Hope you are OK. Hugs... Have a blessed day writing away...............
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Len Gasun
Date: 11/5/2024 6:12:00 PM
Thank you so much for reading my poem and your encouaraging words my dear poet friend Paula. I'm so glad you've enjoyed this. Thank you so much for the best wishes. I'm fine dear with God's mercy despite my super busy days. Have a blessed day too. I'll visit you later ok. Just dropping by a while during my short free time at work. God bless you and your writings. Hugs
Date: 11/3/2024 3:46:00 PM
Nice take on the theme and great photo choice
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Len Gasun
Date: 11/5/2024 6:09:00 PM
Thank you for reading my poem and your encouraging words my dear poet Tom. God bless you always and your writings. I'll be back soon to read your poems ok. Just dropping here while having a short break in my work. Hugs

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