Len Gasun Poet Rhyme

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Nov. 4, 2024        5.30am

Your Heroine on the Hill

Some call me Jill, a jealous kid
I write rhymes for you to read
I’m Jack’s bosom friend
Our friendship has no end.

I’m not jealous at all
I save him in every fall
Like the incident on the hill
I’m strong to work on a treadmill.

I always remind Jack to be nimble
With smiles showing my dimple
I go with his wife once in a while
To share my healthy life’s style.

I give him pie every Christmas
And say, "You are loved by Jesus"
While pulling its plum with joy
He says, "Jesus, I’m a good boy."

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Len Gasun November 22, 2024 at 7:13 PM Jill Nursery Rhyme Contest Judged: 11/18/2024 1:26:00 AM Sponsored by: Charles Messina Place 3 (up to 4th multi-w)

Paula Goldsmith November 18, 2024 at 12:50 PM Back with Congratulations on your win. I enjoyed reading your wonderful write again. Hugs... Have a fun day with your win as you write away.................. Len Gasun November 22, 2024 at 7:14 PM Thank you so much my dearest poet friend Paula for reading and enjoying my poem once again and especially your heartfelt congratulatory greetings. My big congratulations on your wins too. I'll be back later/soon to read again from you. Abundant blessings always. Hugs

Ink Empress November 5, 2024 at 9:34 PM You are a natural with rhymes and the flow of your words here is seamless dear poetic soul, i love what youv done with the prompt and theme and how youv delivered such a cute poem: I especially love the treadmill line: so clever. Pleasure reading this~ best wishes for the contest: sending you light always Len Gasun November 10, 2024 at 4:58 AM Thank you so much for reading my poem and your uplifting words my dear poet friend Ink. Yes, free verse is difficult for me dear. Thank you so much for your best wishes too and the light. Sending back lovingly to you. Hugs

Paula Goldsmith November 4, 2024 at 1:01 PM I enjoyed reading your wonderful write. What a Great Picture/Ending you have here. "Good Luck" Hope you are OK. Hugs... Have a blessed day writing away............... Len Gasun November 5, 2024 at 6:12 PM Thank you so much for reading my poem and your encouaraging words my dear poet friend Paula. I'm so glad you've enjoyed this. Thank you so much for the best wishes. I'm fine dear with God's mercy despite my super busy days. Have a blessed day too. I'll visit you later ok. Just dropping by a while during my short free time at work. God bless you and your writings. Hugs