Michael J. Falotico Poet Couplet

Your Heart I Hold

I know I told you I fell out of it...
       Pride was a wall that just didn't fit...
                Black and white raining memories...
                       Falling slowly but clouding discoveries...
                               Thoughts constructed but a voice with no sound...
                                         Hand written rhymes that float around...
                               Some will sink in as ohers disappear...
                        Most will find pages and land with a tear...
                 Flip through slow and you can feel my soul...
      Swallow my words and your heart I shall hold...

MJF

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Juniper Lock October 15, 2012 at 9:09 PM this is beautifully penned and presented..JL

Vicky Tsiluma October 10, 2012 at 12:43 AM Nicely done Michael! I love what you said about rhymes - not all stand out but those that do make an impact and that's what matters in the end. Nice!

Harry Horsman August 28, 2012 at 10:34 AM all written on an arrow head, Cupid comes to mind, here Michael, a wonderful poem from your pen as usual. enjoyed

Poet Destroyer A August 26, 2012 at 6:14 PM Michael, your poem is beautiful.. always loving your poems.., thank you for sharing, xox~PD

Russell Sivey August 26, 2012 at 12:17 PM Oh, Michael, you have written a masterpiece here! I really love the finest of all your poetry right here before me! I agree with Andrea, your last line makes you poem stand out so much more, it is a grand line! Your words are exemplary and so touching, I feel what you were describing deep within my soul...I love this poem! Great Work!!

Andrea Dietrich August 26, 2012 at 11:33 AM Very lovely couplets, Michael. I just love the pattern you made with your poem too. Awesome final line.

Cory Long August 26, 2012 at 10:56 AM this was very sweet michael.. hope you are having a wonderful sunday.. cory

Anne-Lise Andresen August 26, 2012 at 7:42 AM Happiness comes happiness goes love will always remain. Have a lovely Sunday. oxox hug Anne-Lise :)