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Your Heart I Hold

I know I told you I fell out of it... Pride was a wall that just didn't fit... Black and white raining memories... Falling slowly but clouding discoveries... Thoughts constructed but a voice with no sound... Hand written rhymes that float around... Some will sink in as ohers disappear... Most will find pages and land with a tear... Flip through slow and you can feel my soul... Swallow my words and your heart I shall hold... MJF

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Juniper Lock

Date: 10/15/2012 9:09:00 PM

this is beautifully penned and presented..JL

Vicky Tsiluma

Date: 10/10/2012 12:43:00 AM

Nicely done Michael! I love what you said about rhymes - not all stand out but those that do make an impact and that's what matters in the end. Nice!

Harry Horsman

Date: 8/28/2012 10:34:00 AM

all written on an arrow head, Cupid comes to mind, here Michael, a wonderful poem from your pen as usual. enjoyed

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 8/26/2012 6:14:00 PM

Michael, your poem is beautiful.. always loving your poems.., thank you for sharing, xox~PD

Russell Sivey

Date: 8/26/2012 12:17:00 PM

Oh, Michael, you have written a masterpiece here! I really love the finest of all your poetry right here before me! I agree with Andrea, your last line makes you poem stand out so much more, it is a grand line! Your words are exemplary and so touching, I feel what you were describing deep within my soul...I love this poem! Great Work!!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/26/2012 11:33:00 AM

Very lovely couplets, Michael. I just love the pattern you made with your poem too. Awesome final line.

Cory Long

Date: 8/26/2012 10:56:00 AM

this was very sweet michael.. hope you are having a wonderful sunday.. cory

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 8/26/2012 7:42:00 AM

Happiness comes happiness goes love will always remain. Have a lovely Sunday. oxox hug Anne-Lise :)