Get Your Premium Membership

Your Haunting Face

Could it be you who's in my mind flirting like a leaf in summertime or is this merely an illusion, or a dream deep in my past? I hear the music from the sky flow with a sad face in my mind and it is coming all the while, could it be you who's in my mind?

Copyright © | Year Posted 2008




Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem.

Please Login to post a comment

Date: 11/28/2009 10:25:00 AM
Very nice wording, Fred, so nice to meet u too, and thankxxx for the many comments and compliments on my poetry today... we have no great basketball teams on the East Coast that spark us to enjoy basketball as much as we do football... with a Dad and brother who played it was hard not to get crazy over football... like baseball too.. if u care to read "The Bronx Bombers" and "Sports Nut Craze" u might enjoy... keep writing and sharing ... luv.. Linda-Marie, P.E.P.S. "Sweetheart"
Login to Reply
Date: 12/26/2008 10:46:00 PM
Cleverly conceived! ('she' rather than 'her' I think, since she's the subject...) ...neat repetition of your first line brings the piece sharply into focus. Well done! Best wishes, Keith
Login to Reply
Date: 12/24/2008 6:44:00 AM
Merry Christmas Fred. A beautiful poem. Wishing you all the joy your heart can hold in the new year. Love & hugs, Shar xoxo
Login to Reply
Date: 12/24/2008 6:09:00 AM
Oh my...this is lovely, makes me want to hum it!! ~ Merry Christmas, Fred!! Stay warm and comfy this holiday! ~ Love, Carrie
Login to Reply

Book: Reflection on the Important Things