Your Guitar

I long to be that guitar
you take upon the road
be the serenade you sing to her
feel you wrapped around my soul.
She lays her head so softly
close upon your heart,
if there's one sure thing I know in life,
then I know that you'll never part.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2008



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Date: 5/13/2009 7:22:00 AM
Ann,...this is fantastic ! I love this,..I'm one for the short play on words. james
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Date: 12/1/2008 10:25:00 AM
Great Poem!! I know exactally how you feel. . . ^.^ Love Alexz
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Date: 11/24/2008 9:25:00 AM
This is very romantic Ann. The longing and the want is dances through this write. You have painted a lovely picture. Hope all is well with you. I look forward to reading more of you. Thanks for the comments on my work. Chris.
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Date: 11/24/2008 8:16:00 AM
Ann this was a beautiful poem - I get the sense that you are much greater than any Guitar hon, God Bless, MJ
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Date: 11/24/2008 6:10:00 AM
Great poetry, Ann, and very topical because I'm just watching a live concert on DVD and being wowed by the guitar playing! Love, Nigel
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Date: 11/24/2008 5:34:00 AM
Sweet cadence and rhyming... especially 'road/soul.' A lovely piece! Best wishes, Keith
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