Your Great " I Am "

And there you stand
with your hands on hips
telling the world why.
You liar; misguided fool.
Part of you is lost
suppressed in infinite
to be found with your great I AM;
free of distortion.
You will feel your pure pain;
the lot you were given.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2007

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September 5, 2026 at 8:01 AM
I've really been enjoying your story your characters and storytelling are fantastic. Honestly, I think it would work incredibly well as a manga or webtoon and could help you reach an even bigger audience. I'm a commission-based manga/webtoon artist, and I'd love to help bring your story to life if you're ever interested. Feel free to reach out at gm@il: [email protected] inst@ akiraa_artly
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January 27, 2016 at 10:18 PM
jason, enjoyed reading your poem, Please keep writing and sharing your poetry. XOX -- LINDA --
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September 9, 2015 at 2:23 PM
Jason, thank you for sharing. A pleasure to read... SKAT
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