Your Gone I'M Empty

If today was tomorrow would you still feel the same?
Would everything you hold dear be nothing but a something?
And would you feel sad or empty and cry for everything lost
Go to distant places as if riding on the wind trying to forget
Find yourself in a bottle or a white misty powder perhaps a needle laced with fear
Would you etch lines in your skin could you start over and over again 
I'm just rhyming my rhymes and biding my time until you come back home to stay
All I have are questions for this empty place
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Agustin Avatar
April 13, 2026 at 7:11 AM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
A   Avatar
March 12, 2016 at 9:27 AM
Jamie, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Please keep writing, hope to see a new one from you again. LOVE LINDA
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July 21, 2015 at 3:35 PM
THAT IS DEEP, Jamie, Stopped by to say hello, I enjoyed reading your poem today. FOREVER <3 SKAT"
Tacito Avatar
August 22, 2013 at 2:11 PM
May answers become the sunrise. Love should never have so many questions. It should be certain. This was a damn good writing. Great job w/setting the mood here. I love that 1st line.
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