Your Gone

Im a fighter, when it comes to you
Everything you put me through

Im still standing tall
yet to fall
I am giving it my all

I've done my best
but failed this test

Your walking away, I'm starting to bleed
If only you knew, It was you that I need

Im crying your name
It sounds so weak
I feel such shame
But it's you that I seek

The further you go
The more I die
The less you know
The more I cry

Turn around, hear me calling
I need your hand
My heart is falling
Im slipping through the quick sand

I thought this was a dream
But I have yet to awake
It's realer then it seems
Why can't it be fake

The truth is strong
sometimes blurry
Although it may be wrong
you were gone in a hurry

The blood will dry
my heart will take it's last beat
You may cry
But I have lost, I live in defeat

Never again, will I be the same
No smiles, just blank
Your not the blame
My heart is, only because it sank

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010



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Date: 6/14/2010 10:13:00 PM
very emotional.... "The further you go The more I die The less you know The more I cry" nice write cheers oscar
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Date: 6/14/2010 9:40:00 PM
I love the first line, you have a nice flow of rhyme, enjoyed your write...P.D.
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