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Your Favourite Song

My favourite song ( What becomes of the broken hearted ) Loop poetry. We ask so many difficult questions questions we are unable to answer answer to those who have had hearts broken broken hearts of honest to empower, People like us still walk this lonely land land of so much sadness and illusion illusion of love, happiness and peace peace something without any confusion, Though everyday our aches, pains grow stronger stronger and stronger, cold and all alone alone I search for light, comfort and hope hope someone who cares, and will not condone, Moving, not going anywhere knowing knowing not of what becomes of broken broken hearted leaving those departed departed love ones, we show emotion, what become of those heart broken people people whose loved ones have now departed departed this land with no ifs no what what does become of the broken hearted. 15th April 2017. Contest :- your favourite song, What becomes of the broken hearted, ( Jimmy Ruffin )

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Jan Allison

Date: 4/25/2017 4:41:00 PM

You chose a lovely song to write about Roy:-) good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx

Roy Pett
Date: 4/26/2017 3:15:00 AM

Thank you so much Jan, so pleased you like the song it seems to have been part of my life since my youth and will be for the rest of it, thanks again, Roy. :))

Darren White

Date: 4/17/2017 4:44:00 AM

ooooohhhh you chose one of my favourite songs!!! I love Joan Osborne's version best, I hope you don't mind? https://youtu.be/gA0GcXV2njY The verse you wrote is very special, and I love it. It brought tears to my eyes. Good luck in the contest.

Roy Pett
Date: 4/17/2017 5:04:00 AM

Thank you very much Darren, so pleased you like this song, there are many artist that have sung this, I will listen to Joan's version now you have mentioned it, thanks again for your very kind comment and support, Roy. :))

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/16/2017 8:24:00 PM

You chose a really good song with a deep message and this shows something of your character as well. I am too eclectic in my music tastes. My oh my, I can't even narrow favorites down to TEN!!!

Roy Pett
Date: 4/17/2017 2:28:00 AM

Thank you so much Andrea, I also listen to a wide range of music, I chose this song as the words say so much and I have chosen this for a special day in the future, thanks again for your support and encouragement. Roy. :))

Elizabeth Kinch

Date: 4/16/2017 2:44:00 PM

Brilliant write Roy and a lovely song too. Lots of luck in the contest.

Roy Pett
Date: 4/16/2017 4:58:00 PM

Thank you so much for your very kind comment and best wishes Elizabeth, the song is special, thanks again, Roy. :))

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 4/16/2017 2:09:00 PM

- I read "the naked truth" in these beautiful lines ... really well written, Roy - Luck in the contest - hugs and a 7 // Anne-Lise :)

Roy Pett
Date: 4/16/2017 4:54:00 PM

Thank you so much for your very kind comment and generosity which I really appreciate Anne-Lise, this song is earmarked for an important time of my life, thanks again, Roy. :))