Your Fault

Your Fault

Eleven years and three heartbreaks
from where you left off, 
your little girl sits alone
by a polished rock.
Waiting and waiting
in the poaring rain, 
but knowing it would never
wash away her deep pain.
Mistakes you'd never
be here to forgive.
Tradgeties she'll forever
have to relive.
Memories that will never 
fade away.
Save me! Save me!
Before its too late.
I walk in your footsteps, 
through unintentionally.
I tried forging my own path, 
yet yours is all I see.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Giroux Avatar
August 17, 2009 at 10:17 PM
wow the ending of this poem just concludes the poem in such a amazing way i really like what you do.
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