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Your Eyes

Your eyes make me go insane, Think about you all day alone, Your eyes are so penetrate, That I want to look at them all time. Your eyes are like a blue ocean In which I want to swim and swim, Your eyes are hundred million stars For which I can live and smile. Your eyes are state of the art, Nothing so beautiful, Nothing so deep, That's why I want to be In your eyes.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 2/4/2018 4:31:00 AM
Your eyes are so penetrate, That I want to look at them all time. SO real words...........about attractive eyes................eyes are no doubt enchanting
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Date: 2/4/2016 7:42:00 PM
enjoying this a second time. LINDA
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Date: 10/29/2012 5:03:00 AM
A warm welcome to PoetrySoup I offer to you this morning Nairuhi. I wish for you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. Hoping you find even more inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets. Thank you for sharing your writing with us. Love, Carol
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Date: 10/27/2012 9:09:00 PM
N Toy, wow..this is deep.... enjoyed your poem* Goodnight! Always~ PD
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Date: 10/27/2012 8:37:00 PM
Made me smile, Nairuhi. It is so innocent and charming. Lovely write. Love ya, Toquyen
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Date: 10/27/2012 7:30:00 PM
Beautiful poem! Such a wonderful message too! Welcome to poetry soup! :)
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Date: 10/27/2012 12:03:00 PM
I like your beautiful poem. - Have a nice weekend. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
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