Your Eyes

Your eyes make me go insane,
Think about you all day alone,
Your eyes are so penetrate,
That I want to look at them all time.

Your eyes are like a blue ocean
In which I want to swim and swim,
Your eyes are hundred million stars
For which I can live and smile.

Your eyes are state of the art,
Nothing so beautiful, Nothing so deep,
That's why I want to be
In your eyes.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Imtiaz Avatar
February 4, 2018 at 4:31 AM
Your eyes are so penetrate, That I want to look at them all time. SO real words...........about attractive eyes................eyes are no doubt enchanting
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February 4, 2016 at 7:42 PM
enjoying this a second time. LINDA
Brown Avatar
October 29, 2012 at 5:03 AM
A warm welcome to PoetrySoup I offer to you this morning Nairuhi. I wish for you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. Hoping you find even more inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets. Thank you for sharing your writing with us. Love, Carol
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October 27, 2012 at 9:09 PM
N Toy, wow..this is deep.... enjoyed your poem* Goodnight! Always~ PD
Harrell Avatar
October 27, 2012 at 8:37 PM
Made me smile, Nairuhi. It is so innocent and charming. Lovely write. Love ya, Toquyen
Robillard Avatar
October 27, 2012 at 7:30 PM
Beautiful poem! Such a wonderful message too! Welcome to poetry soup! :)
Andresen Avatar
October 27, 2012 at 12:03 PM
I like your beautiful poem. - Have a nice weekend. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
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