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Your Eyes

Your blue eyes instantly pierce me, And hold me down so I can't be free. I'm looking into the deepest of shades, And the noise around me fades. I'm locked into a mesmerizing stare, And this moment that we share. Will be on my mind all day, There's no need to say. That you capture me with one glance, And I don't stand a chance.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 12/11/2010 4:15:00 PM
Great Job , very captivating
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Maria Liu
Date: 11/28/2012 10:51:00 AM
Thank you very much :) if you have time do read my latest poem 'Joe'
Date: 12/8/2010 5:51:00 AM
I'm not sure how to reply to comments because i am new but thank you to everyone, i really appreciate the positive feedback :)
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Date: 12/7/2010 5:03:00 AM
I would like to welcome you to PoetrySoup Maria. Wishing you the best in your writing endeavors. You can look to the left side of the main page and find lots of information on PoetrySoup including contests by members of PoetrySoup and contests by the PoetrySoup site also. Love, Carol
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Maria Liu
Date: 11/28/2012 10:51:00 AM
Thank you very much :) if you have time do read my latest poem 'Joe'
Date: 12/6/2010 1:18:00 PM
Strong write my dear... Love is powerful and captivating... pasion runs through your words...Michael
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Maria Liu
Date: 11/28/2012 10:52:00 AM
Thank you very much :) if you have time do read my latest poem 'Joe'

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