Your Eyes

Your blue eyes instantly pierce me,
And hold me down so I can't be free.
I'm looking into the deepest of shades,
And the noise around me fades.

I'm locked into a mesmerizing stare,
And this moment that we share.
Will be on my mind all day,
There's no need to say.

That you capture me with one glance,
And I don't stand a chance.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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December 11, 2010 at 4:15 PM
Great Job , very captivating
Liu Avatar
November 28, 2012 at 10:51 AM
Thank you very much :) if you have time do read my latest poem 'Joe'
Liu Avatar
December 8, 2010 at 5:51 AM
I'm not sure how to reply to comments because i am new but thank you to everyone, i really appreciate the positive feedback :)
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December 7, 2010 at 5:03 AM
I would like to welcome you to PoetrySoup Maria. Wishing you the best in your writing endeavors. You can look to the left side of the main page and find lots of information on PoetrySoup including contests by members of PoetrySoup and contests by the PoetrySoup site also. Love, Carol
Liu Avatar
November 28, 2012 at 10:51 AM
Thank you very much :) if you have time do read my latest poem 'Joe'
Falotico Avatar
December 6, 2010 at 1:18 PM
Strong write my dear... Love is powerful and captivating... pasion runs through your words...Michael
Liu Avatar
November 28, 2012 at 10:52 AM
Thank you very much :) if you have time do read my latest poem 'Joe'
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