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Your Eyes

Your eyes Draw sighs And dewy dew From between my thighs Whenever I look into Your eyes Gray-green Irises Pupils ringed with gold That's your soul Shining through Never fails to thaw the cold Tantalize Mesmerize The number of beats In my heart rise Whenever I look into Your eyes Inspired by the Pen to Face, Face to Pen contest

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Daver Austin

Date: 4/24/2009 3:38:00 PM

Wow! This old heart damn near stopped. You got style! Love, daver

Denis Joe

Date: 4/16/2009 11:11:00 AM

I like what you have done here. It's a very good piece of love poetry without feeling the need to use 'ye olde' language. The structure is great in its novelty for a rhyme. It gives the poem a sense of humour without any loss of tenderness.

Jan Harvey

Date: 4/15/2009 8:55:00 AM

Your poem senses fulfilled, and pleasant with imagination. Your Eyes is packed with not just passion, but substantial love. Thanks. Jan