Corinne Curcio Poet Rhyme

Your Eyes

Your eyes 
Draw sighs
And dewy dew
From between my thighs
Whenever I look into 
Your eyes

Gray-green Irises
Pupils ringed with gold
That's your soul
Shining through
Never fails to thaw the cold

Tantalize
Mesmerize
The number of beats
In my heart rise
Whenever I look into
Your eyes


Inspired by the Pen to Face, Face to Pen contest

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Daver Austin April 24, 2009 at 3:38 PM Wow! This old heart damn near stopped. You got style! Love, daver

Denis Joe April 16, 2009 at 11:11 AM I like what you have done here. It's a very good piece of love poetry without feeling the need to use 'ye olde' language. The structure is great in its novelty for a rhyme. It gives the poem a sense of humour without any loss of tenderness.

Jan Harvey April 15, 2009 at 8:55 AM Your poem senses fulfilled, and pleasant with imagination. Your Eyes is packed with not just passion, but substantial love. Thanks. Jan