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your eyes

when i look in your eyes i see the moon shining overhead like a angel in the night when i look in your eyes i see the oceon crashing on the shore like a big blue blanket when i lookin your eyes i see the sun burning brightly like a mass of beauty when i look in your eyes i see the stars twinkleing beautifully like flowers in the spring when i look in your eyes i see the one that i love the one that i think about everyday i see you

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 6/18/2009 9:39:00 AM
The eyes can be so telling indeed. Good work!
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Date: 5/1/2009 8:58:00 AM
exilerating, it really moved me, just how much you love him! awwwwwwwww
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Date: 5/1/2009 8:37:00 AM
Thrilling.
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Date: 4/9/2009 2:20:00 PM
I agree with Dani! jmg
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Date: 4/6/2009 5:51:00 AM
aww, that is very sweet, give my regards to the lucky boy.
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