Your Eyes

when i look in your eyes
i see the moon
shining overhead 
like a angel in the night

when i look in your eyes
i see the oceon
crashing on the shore
like a big blue blanket

when i lookin your eyes
i see the sun
burning brightly
like a mass of beauty

when i look in your eyes 
i see the stars
twinkleing beautifully
like flowers in the spring

when i look in your eyes
i see the one that i love
the one that i think about everyday
i see you
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Bird Avatar
June 18, 2009 at 9:39 AM
The eyes can be so telling indeed. Good work!
Sousa Avatar
May 1, 2009 at 8:58 AM
exilerating, it really moved me, just how much you love him! awwwwwwwww
Shahwan Avatar
May 1, 2009 at 8:37 AM
Thrilling.
Goff Avatar
April 9, 2009 at 2:20 PM
I agree with Dani! jmg
Sousa Avatar
April 6, 2009 at 5:51 AM
aww, that is very sweet, give my regards to the lucky boy.
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