Chetta Achara Poet Rhyme

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Your Eyes

The eye is the window to the soul.
Proverbs 30:17

Your eyes tell me
you don't think our love is enough,
life is no longer carefree,
love has become a handcuff
that keeps you unfree
and stagnant.

Your eyes tell me
freedom has become a magnet,
forcing you to flee
all of love's entanglement.
You are blind to my heart's plea,
And so, just go!


For: Soul Poetry Contest
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Sponsor: Robert James Liguori
November 17, 2021

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Robert James Liguori November 21, 2021 at 9:54 AM Thank you for entering the soul contest! Congrats on your placement. Chetta Achara November 21, 2021 at 12:22 PM Thank you.

Andy Ervin November 17, 2021 at 10:41 PM Nice!!! Chetta Achara November 18, 2021 at 12:16 AM Thanks. Chetta Achara November 18, 2021 at 12:15 AM Thanks.