Your Eyes

Your eyes have put me in a trance
with just one frozen picture glance
If I could hold your face and see
those lovely eyes were just for me…

Your eyes have put me in a daze
I know that love within them stays
If I could slip into their core
you’d find it’s me you would adore.

Your eyes so lovely shining bright
they reach into my soul at night
If you were here instead of there
into your eyes I’d have to stare.

Your eyes my soul they open wide
from them my feelings cannot hide
with just one frozen picture glance
your eyes have put me in a trance.


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Gava Avatar
November 22, 2021 at 11:58 PM
I loved the rhymes. Perfect and coherent??.
Gava Avatar
November 22, 2021 at 11:51 PM
I loved the rhymes. Perfect and coherent??.
Mcintosh Avatar
December 24, 2020 at 7:13 AM
This is a brilliant verse that sparks joy in my soul... opens a door to music that speaks light and love, delight from above. I love it. Merry Christmas Eve and God B L E S S you friend
Levasseur Avatar
December 24, 2020 at 10:18 AM
Thank you very much! it means a lot coming from a poetess as you.
Nicole Avatar
December 23, 2020 at 1:23 PM
"With just one frozen picture glance, your eyes have put me in a trance" Oh my !! This is beautiful in so many amazing ways. Soft, dreamy and romantic. Simply breathtaking. Your thoughts leave me in complete awe. :) Brandy
Levasseur Avatar
December 23, 2020 at 2:44 PM
Thank you so much for such kind and thoughtful words! I'm glad the poem touched you.
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