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Poetry by Robert M. Levasseur

Your eyes have put me in a trance with just one frozen picture glance If I could hold your face and see those lovely eyes were just for me… Your eyes have put me in a daze I know that love within them stays If I could slip into their core you’d find it’s me you would adore. Your eyes so lovely shining bright they reach into my soul at night If you were here instead of there into your eyes I’d have to stare. Your eyes my soul they open wide from them my feelings cannot hide with just one frozen picture glance your eyes have put me in a trance. (click the pic for a preview of my upcoming book!)

Copyright © | Year Posted 2020




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Date: 11/22/2021 11:58:00 PM
I loved the rhymes. Perfect and coherent??.
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Date: 11/22/2021 11:51:00 PM
I loved the rhymes. Perfect and coherent??.
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Date: 12/24/2020 7:13:00 AM
This is a brilliant verse that sparks joy in my soul... opens a door to music that speaks light and love, delight from above. I love it. Merry Christmas Eve and God B L E S S you friend
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Rob Levasseur
Date: 12/24/2020 10:18:00 AM
Thank you very much! it means a lot coming from a poetess as you.
Date: 12/23/2020 1:23:00 PM
"With just one frozen picture glance, your eyes have put me in a trance" Oh my !! This is beautiful in so many amazing ways. Soft, dreamy and romantic. Simply breathtaking. Your thoughts leave me in complete awe. :) Brandy
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Rob Levasseur
Date: 12/23/2020 2:44:00 PM
Thank you so much for such kind and thoughtful words! I'm glad the poem touched you.