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Your Creed

Screwed Contest Sponsor: Rob Carmack My love you left me far out west, I knew our love would be a test, before you leave, one last request, tell me baby, "why so depressed?" I promised you help when in need, I broke it out of bitter greed. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ That morning I got up and dressed, saying good bye, who would've guessed? younger days I was your conquest, you're older now and not impressed. You said our good bye was agreed, I said, “that's fine good bye indeed." ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Through all our changes I confess, too many times I was so stressed, you seemed different from the rest, my sadness seemed so unexpressed. Mind races though I am fatigued, warned you were a different breed. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Laying I prayed on your headrest, so tired, needing to decompress, had a feeling you were distressed, so now it's my turn to suppress. How in the world should I proceed? To see the truth behind your creed. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ LaCharta Poem Four stanza's with 8 syllables in each line. 192 Syllables in all Checked Syllable Count at: howmanysyllables.com Rhyme scheme: AAAABB AAAABB AAAABB AAAABB Date Written: February 14, 2016

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