Your Call

Oh my God, without that ring
How ugly the telephone was
When I lost hope of your call.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Dietrich Avatar
March 8, 2011 at 12:20 AM
Very feeling one!
Mehta Avatar
March 7, 2011 at 1:55 PM
Lovely thought you have expressed in this write but give once more to the syllable count of a haiku 5/7/5. Betim
Tacito Avatar
March 7, 2011 at 11:50 AM
Excellent, Betim! Wow.
Armstrong Avatar
March 7, 2011 at 9:17 AM
Hah. Nicely done.
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