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Oh my God, without that ring How ugly the telephone was When I lost hope of your call.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 3/8/2011 12:20:00 AM
Very feeling one!
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Date: 3/7/2011 1:55:00 PM
Lovely thought you have expressed in this write but give once more to the syllable count of a haiku 5/7/5. Betim
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Date: 3/7/2011 11:50:00 AM
Excellent, Betim! Wow.
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Date: 3/7/2011 9:17:00 AM
Hah. Nicely done.
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