Your Betrayal

Your Betrayal 
is like a stab in the back
 I can die slowly or die from a heart attack...
 I had you
 until you betrayed me like that....
 This not an opinion
 this is quite a living fact.
 
Your Betrayal
 made my life really clear
 even though i remember the times i whispered in your ear.
 
You betrayed me
 and girl you played me
 I miss my mother she died back in the 80's.
 
This feeling 
that I'm feeling right now
 is a feeling from god
 stating that I was lost but now I'm found.
 
You set me up
 I can feel the deep cuts.
 Blood dripping fastly
 you betrayed me ashley.
 
Your betrayal
 show me how to win
 even though
 I still got these scars on my skin.
 
You try to hurt me
 but you only made me stronger
 Your betrayal
 showed me that your phony.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012



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Date: 7/3/2012 12:09:00 PM
the betrayal is indeed what made you stronger therefore a wall is put up and hard to knock down with the exception every now and than, your write speaks strongly keep your head up and your heart guarded the right one with no phony like qualities will come along just be patient:), ... p.d.
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