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Author's Notes: I wrote this "Septet" today, entitled: "Your Beauty Is," in honor of my wife of over 23 years -- Ingrid. The Septet poetic format consists of a seven-line stanza of varying meter and an AA BB CC rhyming sequence in the first six lines, followed by a final asymmetrical line for special emphasis (set off from the symmetry of the original rhyming sequence). For me, as a poet and writer, "Beauty" and "Love" are both to behold and cherish. Both of these states of being or attributes together constitute a most special feeling and a powerful emotive force in our lives. (Gary Bateman, October 11, 2014) (Rhyme Septet poetic format)

Categories: allegory, beauty, emotions, feelings, i love you, together, wife.

Your beauty is a most precious flower Which signifies our love by the hour; Your eyes twinkle most bright like stars high in the night; Your touch is gentle, exciting, and feels so right; Your scent is enchanting and your skin is so soft; All of these make me think of you darling—so oft! You are my beauty and my only true love in this life! Gary Bateman, Copyright © All Rights Reserved, Schoeningen, Germany (October 11, 2014) (Rhyme Septet poetic format)

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BE Bailey

Date: 11/12/2014 3:06:00 PM

This is such a beautiful poem Gary. I love it. Thank you for sharing this wonderful piece.Have a blessed day.Warm regards "B"

Gary Bateman
Date: 11/12/2014 4:32:00 PM

"B," Thanks so much for dropping by and checking out my poetry. Glad you liked this Rhyme Septet that I wrote back in October. I will most certainly visit your poems as well. Let's stay in touch!! Best Always, Gary

Therese Bacha

Date: 10/13/2014 4:50:00 PM

WOW Gary, its always so nice to read a love poem from a husband to his wife. I so enjoyed reading your love poem, she does seem an amazing Lady. Bless you and your family. Your writing is far beyond excellent. Nice to have met you. I will be back soon. Hugs Terry xoxo

Gary Bateman
Date: 10/14/2014 10:35:00 AM

Thanks Terry so much here. Your words are very kind. I'm glad you liked this write dedicated to my wife Ingrid. (We live here in Germany.) I am very blessed to have her in my life. I am just about to post a Shakespearean Sonnet ("Your Kiss") here today also dedicated to my wife. If I focus on her I can better write romantic verse. I look forward to your poems too!! Best!! Gary

Robert Lindley

Date: 10/12/2014 5:04:00 PM

Another Super 7 my friend!!! I too, write for my wife such beauties to read. My wife loves it and me all the more for doing so..

Gary Bateman
Date: 10/13/2014 8:59:00 AM

Robert, Thanks again so much for your review and comment here!! It sounds like we are both of like minds when it comes to "writes" for our wives. My wife, Ingrid, likes it when I venture out of the dark realm writing and when I ply my poetic talents on lighter, emotional topics. Best Always!! Gary

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 10/12/2014 4:52:00 PM

Dear Gary, What a beautiful dedication to your beloved wife Ingrid! You know how to keep romance alive. Love, carolyn

Gary Bateman
Date: 10/13/2014 9:03:00 AM

Thanks Carolyn for your wonderful comment and observation here!! I've got another one of these to come out soon called "Your Kiss" (a Shakespearean Sonnet). I plan to dedicate this one to my wife Ingrid as well. It's indeed important for us to cherish the love and romance in our lives. (I just visited your poetry too!!) Cheers, Gary

Liam Mcdaid

Date: 10/11/2014 3:44:00 PM

outstanding piece dear friend very sweet beautifully painted

Gary Bateman
Date: 10/12/2014 9:04:00 AM

Liam my friend . . . Thanks so much. I'm glad this one made a great impression on you. Talk to you soon!! Cheers, Gary

Dorian Petersen Potter

Date: 10/11/2014 2:01:00 PM

Very romantic and tender Gary! ;) enjoyed it. A 7 from me! Love peace and light! xxxx D.

Gary Bateman
Date: 10/12/2014 9:07:00 AM

D, Thanks for the read and your very generous comment here. (I can actually write things other than horror stuff -- as I remind my wife.) My Best Wishes . . . Gary

Jan Allison

Date: 10/11/2014 1:41:00 PM

wow lovely romantic rhyme Gary:-) and i love yr collaboration poem too:-) hugs Jan xxx

Gary Bateman
Date: 10/12/2014 9:12:00 AM

Hi Jan, Thanks for the read and observation here. Glad you liked this one!! I'm constantly now experimenting with different poetic formats and various different subjects. Liam and I decided to work together on some projects. He likes the sensitive, emotive themes and he's exceptionally good with them. Best Wishes, Gary

Gry Christensen

Date: 10/11/2014 1:23:00 PM

This is so romantic and what a very nice way to honour your wife! Yes, I have no problems seeing and feeling what you express in your poem is real and true love. Perhaps the emotion us humans feel strongest....... This is lovely! All the best, Gry

Gary Bateman
Date: 10/12/2014 9:17:00 AM

Gry, Thanks for your read and your most gracious comments!! I will do some more of these. I don't want to get tagged as someone who only writes dark themes. I actually write on whatever interests me at the time. Yes, love is the strongest emotion for us humans, and the best one to be the recipient of. Best Wishes, Gary