Your Beautiful Spirit

I open my mind for you to look
And see that I am like a book
Very easy to read in every way
Sitting here waiting for you to say

Things that you like to go and do
I want to know if I can go too
Just hanging about in your company
And that is where really I want to be

We can go places or just hang around
Even talk freely or not make a sound
I dream that you love me as I love you
To love you forever as I want to do

You are so pretty that I can say
That you make it so easy for me stay
I love you eternally and even more
Your love makes it easy for me to soar

If you ever stopped loving me tell me so
It would not be easy but I’d let you go
Could be so angry I know you would hear it
But I could not darken your beautiful spirit

I hope you are happy with the love of this man
He knows that he loves you it is in his plan
To be with you always as your spouse
And to live together and build your own house

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009



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Date: 8/24/2009 5:22:00 PM
Nicely written passionate love story. Keep writing. Sara
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Date: 8/22/2009 5:45:00 PM
What a beautiful heartfelt write John. Thank you for sharing. Love, Carol
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Date: 8/22/2009 9:09:00 AM
wow-this is a fav--so romantico---excellent--charma:)
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