Your Ambiance Tastes Like Candy
Your ambiance tastes like candy
And is reminiscent of your favorite chocolate
It melts in her mouth
Like the words off of your tongue
She writes better without him
With you as her new inspiration
And ideas flow faster
Like a river headed for nowhere
She is visibly resistant and apathetic
And he is so pathetic
But you are so empathetic
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