Young Moon

When the night grew young,
I saw the flowers sing songs,
Only for the moon.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Brown Avatar
August 2, 2011 at 3:46 PM
Congratulations on your poetry making it through round one in the PoetrySoup International Poetry contest Amanda. I wish you the best in the final round. Love, Carol
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November 10, 2010 at 11:07 AM
Congratulations on your poetry making it through the first round of the Poetrysoup site contest Amanda. The best to you in the finals. Love, Carol
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November 9, 2010 at 4:27 PM
Congratulations on your featured poem this week...an excelent form dear poet ! much love, james
Brown Avatar
November 8, 2010 at 9:52 AM
Congratulatons on your poem being featured this week Amanda. Love, Carol
Roberts Avatar
November 8, 2010 at 9:28 AM
lovely haiku, congrats on having it featured this week
Guzzi Avatar
September 13, 2009 at 12:39 PM
really liked it very loverly!Light & Love
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August 13, 2009 at 3:43 PM
Nice use of personification and imagery for an interesting view. Enjoyed it. Karen
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August 13, 2009 at 3:36 PM
Nice Haiku, Amanda, flowers singing songs for the moon! And thanks for your comments. Love, Gert
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August 13, 2009 at 3:08 PM
Very descriptive and expressive. Keep writing. Sara
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