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Lovers deeply in love Love grew and changed Living life to fullest Old age deepened love

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The Situation

Date: 9/8/2023 10:08:00 AM

The two become one. And then get tortured by their children. and have their spirits raised by their grand children.

Sara Kendrick
Date: 9/8/2023 12:06:00 PM

TS, You got that one right. Aren't grandchildren and great grandchildren wonderful. LOL..I should say that children are wonderful also but we as parents suffer when they go wrong and are able to glow when they do something right. They (both children and grandchildren) light up my life. Thank you for the visit and uplifting review. Sara

Ministryofdreams Daisy Silk

Date: 9/7/2023 9:32:00 PM

Graceful and sweet and it's all one could hope for in love. Warming words and beautiful picture.

Sara Kendrick
Date: 9/8/2023 4:54:00 AM

Why, thank you, DS. I appreciate the visit. Sara

Ink Empress

Date: 9/7/2023 7:48:00 AM

This made me feel so much, how soul warming it is to be in deep love, grow old together, ah. Lucky and blessed are the ones that share a love that deepens with time .

Sara Kendrick
Date: 9/7/2023 9:48:00 AM

Yes, those that have that kind of love are very rare, IE. Thanks for the kind review of my work. I appreciate the time spent here. Sara

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 9/7/2023 1:36:00 AM

Good to strive for endless love.

Sara Kendrick
Date: 9/7/2023 5:48:00 AM

Victor, It is and that is the way it should be but it doesn't happen that way anymore for at least 50% of the marriages so I am told. Thanks for the visit. Sara

Hiya Sharma

Date: 9/6/2023 11:33:00 PM

"Old age deepened love" That's an evergreen love, so full of depth and heartwarming emotions.. Ah, the way you've described what a true, timeless and forever love feels like.. Such a gorgeous write dear, absolutely beautiful! :)

Sara Kendrick
Date: 9/7/2023 5:47:00 AM

God's design for mankind was to have that kind of love, Hiya, but, alas, it has been disregarded by mankind and now it barely exists now. Your visits add a nice touch to my works. I appreciate each visit. Sara

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 9/6/2023 12:59:00 PM

- Reflection on getting older... love is ageless, Sara :) - Great written :) - hugs

Sara Kendrick
Date: 9/6/2023 2:16:00 PM

Anne-Lise, Yes, I think true love is ageless if both parties agree. Thanks for the nice review of my work. Sara

Sotto Poet

Date: 9/6/2023 9:51:00 AM

Your writing, Sara, is exceptional. The tone and rhythm of your poem are delightful. I thoroughly enjoyed the captivating voice and beautiful words that adorned your piece.

Sara Kendrick
Date: 9/6/2023 10:35:00 AM

Why, thank you, Lasaad. These are not that easy to write and since poetry involves counting syllables a lot it can be tricky. Your visits are always up lifting with such nice reviews of my work. Sara

Paul Bell

Date: 9/6/2023 7:47:00 AM

It's actually good that love lasts into old age, especially as the internet offers so much choice.

Sara Kendrick
Date: 9/6/2023 10:32:00 AM

Paul, Yes, if a person wanted to go in that direction the internet offers all kinds of sexual experiences, but it doesn't offer love unless one is looking to date someone that will lead to a lasting relationship. A little bump in marital bliss can cause one to want to go astray or end it altogether but we are in it for the long haul. Thanks for the visit to my page and the nice comments. Sara