Young Love

Young love
    was a sunrise
that took our breath away;
today as sun sets, still in love
    we stay
Copyright © | Year Posted 2026

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Swan Avatar
February 10, 2026 at 3:05 AM
Sweet :)
Dronsfield Avatar
February 2, 2026 at 3:00 PM
A beautiful Cinquain!!
Daniel Avatar
January 31, 2026 at 5:18 AM
Aha! Beautiful:)
Rolland Avatar
January 31, 2026 at 4:09 AM
true and sincere, best wishes
Croft Avatar
January 31, 2026 at 1:40 AM
Beautiful cinquain
Etgen-Baker Avatar
January 30, 2026 at 5:33 PM
awwww!
May Avatar
January 30, 2026 at 3:57 PM
Very nice Andrea, best wishes
Narain Avatar
January 30, 2026 at 11:34 AM
Sweet, romantic poem.
Godwin Avatar
January 29, 2026 at 7:24 PM
I don't know about lion grand, but I think this is one sweet gem. Oh, wouldn't such be wonderful.
Kerr Avatar
January 29, 2026 at 7:02 PM
This is so romantic and heartfelt. Impeccable word choice, Andrea Best of luck with it, Howard
Hind Avatar
January 29, 2026 at 6:08 PM
Very nice Cinquain!!
Alhemaidy Avatar
January 29, 2026 at 2:51 PM
Nice cute write!
Kauffman Avatar
January 29, 2026 at 12:07 PM
So tender, Andrea. It touched my heart! Best wishes for the contest. Blessings!
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