Young Love

A young girl weeping
                  salty tears staining her face
                    young man not coming
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Neumann Avatar
May 7, 2018 at 1:20 AM
Pun intented in the last line? Nice one to read and enjoy. Still waiting for Godot...
Blanca Avatar
May 7, 2018 at 6:16 PM
Just wanting to know how responders would react to the last line. You have been the only one to notice.
Leiser Avatar
May 5, 2018 at 5:03 PM
Oh so sad! Great haiku, Carlos! :)
Blanca Avatar
May 6, 2018 at 9:44 AM
Thank you Laura. Young hearts are very tender.
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