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Young Lambs In Poverty

In this dark and dreary world, the urchins forced to toil Their body bared and tarnished, gain little sleep and boil Tiny hands and feets famished, no love they had meet Like young lambs for slaughter, were they forced to cheat Sold away by father, with no heart but only greed How my mind cries, watching this heinous deed And sighs, its a discriminating fate unfair. © Nadiya (22 Jan '15) *Won 4th place on 4 Feb 2015 in the contest 'Interlocking Rhyme' by Isiah Zerbst

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Date: 2/15/2015 10:18:00 AM
Poesy This is a sweet lovely win. *Skat LOVE*
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Date: 2/15/2015 12:13:00 PM
Pleased that you liked my write... thank you
Date: 2/2/2015 11:14:00 PM
Congrats on win friend>rajat
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Date: 2/3/2015 5:20:00 AM
Thank you Rajat
Date: 2/2/2015 9:14:00 PM
You have brought light to the deep sadness of poverty. My heart breaks for these children who are sold by their own. It happens too often...congrats on your amazing win, Nad! Hugs, Rhonda
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Date: 2/2/2015 9:29:00 PM
It has become too common Rhonda... thank you for the wish and the visit... hugs..
Date: 2/2/2015 12:21:00 PM
Such a sad plight described so eloquently in this powerful piece - many congrats on your win:-) Hugs Jan x
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Date: 2/2/2015 9:27:00 PM
Thank you very much Jan... be blessed
Date: 1/31/2015 6:17:00 AM
poverty people being stripped pf dignity as rich get richer no end to mans greed powerful pen nadiya really sad to see excellent piece
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Date: 1/31/2015 6:29:00 AM
Thank you very much Liam... pleased that you liked my pen... regards,nad!
Date: 1/28/2015 7:55:00 AM
This is an awesome and wonderful poem. Its nice spending some time here.. It feels so quality and deserving. Great pen friend
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Date: 1/28/2015 9:34:00 AM
Thank you friend for your comment... appreciate your visit.. hugs,nad!
Date: 1/26/2015 3:32:00 PM
Well penned, indeed; best of luck in the contest.
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Date: 1/27/2015 2:00:00 AM
Thank your friend.. appreciate your visit... lov,nad!
Date: 1/24/2015 12:18:00 PM
Awesome piece dear Nadiya ! I really jubilated ! Keep it up
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Date: 1/24/2015 12:54:00 PM
Thank you friend... pleased that you liked it.
Date: 1/24/2015 12:04:00 PM
The last line is essence. Lovely done, my lovely friend. i feel 7 here. bl
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Date: 1/24/2015 12:53:00 PM
Thank you friend... appreciate your comments.. lov, nad!
Date: 1/24/2015 7:52:00 AM
Sad thoughts. Nadiya, this is a great poem. :) have a nice day ~SKAT~
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Date: 1/24/2015 8:56:00 AM
I appreciate that you took time to read my poems and comment on them... love n hugs, nad!
Date: 1/22/2015 12:19:00 PM
You write so well Nadiya. You are exceptional. Best wishes to you. My blessings>>>Your friend Rajat
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Date: 1/22/2015 12:24:00 PM
Thank you for the blessings and comment... wish I could write Haiku like you do.. love, nad!
Date: 1/22/2015 8:44:00 AM
Poverty is a cruel master, this is a tale of sadness articulately expressed with a heart of softness.
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Date: 1/22/2015 9:13:00 AM
Its too cruel even to b expressed... Thank you Richard
Date: 1/22/2015 7:52:00 AM
A window into the soul of the author that saddens the heart. Emile.
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Date: 1/22/2015 9:12:00 AM
Thank you Emile for the visit...

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