Young Insect

Caterpillar road
Roaming forward and backward
Never knowing where
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Brown Avatar
April 30, 2010 at 9:28 AM
Congratulations on your win in Raul's contest Cecil. Love, Carol
Mehta Avatar
April 29, 2010 at 7:55 PM
Congrats on the win.
Scripca Avatar
April 29, 2010 at 7:30 PM
CONGRATULATIONS for your 11thv8g8 place. Let's pop-up the CHAMPAGNE!!!
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April 29, 2010 at 7:24 PM
I really liked the perspective in this one the first time I read it. Congratulations on your win in Raul's contest. Way to go my friend. Enjoy your honor. Karen
Sweetheart Avatar
April 29, 2010 at 7:11 PM
Congrats Cecil on your winning poem in Raul's contest ... a perfect description of the caterpillar's thoughts .. enjoy your wonderful win..luv.. "Sweetheart"
Moreno Avatar
April 29, 2010 at 6:25 PM
Cecil, congratulations on your success in my Caterpillar's Gait contest...Raul
Brown Avatar
April 28, 2010 at 10:50 AM
Cecil , I wish you the best in Raul's contest. He is going to have a real hard time picking winners this time. Love, Carol
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April 27, 2010 at 5:17 PM
I really like the opening line. The title is so fitting. Good luck in the contest. Karen
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April 27, 2010 at 4:59 PM
Great interpertation of the picture..Should be in the winner's circle...Good luck..Keep the creative pen flowing..Sara
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