Vali Tsironi Poet Enclosed Rhyme

Young In the Dream

Young in the dream
in loneliness alone.
Memory searching for name
the day.

In the paper touching a tear...

Young in the youth
and our book

open

in last page....

Vali Tsironi
(from my second poetry collection "Amphorae's of the sea")

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Skat A July 2, 2016 at 12:58 AM Vali, Welcome to poetry soup, after reading this I know you are an Accomplished writer. Glad to see you enjoying it so much here. Flourishing among this community is easier than you think. Keep up the good work. *SKAT* Vali Tsironi July 3, 2016 at 4:41 AM Thank you very much for your words SKAT! Very helpfully for me! All my best for you to! Vali

Paul Callus June 28, 2016 at 5:28 PM Lovely, yet sad seeing that this could well have been the premature end of a relationship. Luckily the young have the benefit of time and new experiences. ~ Regards // paul Vali Tsironi June 29, 2016 at 1:04 PM Well, this is the first poem of my 2nd published poetry collection "Amphorae of the sea" published at 1996. Thanks for your thoughts Paul! Precious!

Tim Smith May 18, 2016 at 3:57 PM A deep poem Vali...To be alone at the end of the book is quite sad. Vali Tsironi June 29, 2016 at 1:22 PM A great thought Tim! Thanks!