Bob Quigley Poet Rhyme

Young Dreams

Woven through the fabric of forever
Sits a kingdom shrouded in the mist
A castle built with youths imagination
It's spires and steeples were once heaven kissed

Today the once proud land has been abandoned
Still, around the corner there may wait
Young dreamers who will rebuild all the fences
A new road, or a secret gate

11/13/2011
Written for 'In a land called fantasy" contest

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Carol Sunshine Brown November 23, 2011 at 6:32 AM Congratulations on your win in Tracie's "In a land called fantasy" contest Bob. Love, Carol Bob Quigley November 23, 2011 at 8:40 AM Bob Quigley November 23, 2011 at 8:40 AM Appreciate it Carol

Robert A. Dufresne November 22, 2011 at 5:29 PM very well done Bob. congratulations to you on a deserving win. Like the way you weaved that line in so subtly. great job of it and thanks for the comment Bob Quigley November 22, 2011 at 10:16 PM Appreciate your comments Robert

Linda-Marie Sweetheart November 22, 2011 at 5:25 PM Congrats Bob on a superb win for this great entry luv.. most exellent piece .. Bob Quigley November 22, 2011 at 10:17 PM Thanks very much Linda-Marie

Don Johnson November 22, 2011 at 3:45 PM see it there amongst the mountains, turrets there amongst the mist, nicely told great recounting, yes this surely bliss..... Bob Quigley November 22, 2011 at 10:17 PM Thank you Don.

Poet Destroyer A November 13, 2011 at 9:35 PM Bob, i like to think it was all a secret.. love the imagination built here...good luck in the contest ...Enjoyed stopping by tonight, have yourself a lovely night ;-) ,..LINDA Bob Quigley November 13, 2011 at 10:04 PM Thanks for stopping by Linda

Kim Merryman November 13, 2011 at 8:35 PM Wonderful poem, Bob. I really like the way it flows so smoothly. Kim Bob Quigley November 13, 2011 at 10:05 PM Many thanks Kim. Appreciate your comments

Michael J. Falotico November 13, 2011 at 9:11 AM Fine Poetry my friend.... Michael Bob Quigley November 13, 2011 at 10:14 AM Thank you Michael