Notes About The Poem

Young Dreams

Nature so feels the murmur of summer,
And the whispers of many young dreams;
With spring past, the vibrant newcomer,
Bears gilded rays and clouds of cream.

Romantic red robin becomes a Don Juan,
With his sweet and captivating  tune;
Seedlings grow before the season's gone,
Dance of silvery breezes under the moon.

Nature perceives the rapture of roses,
And the untamed beat of all wild things,
And feels His joy anytime God composes,
With all young life softly blossoming!

Dignified toad croaks on his lily pad,
As giddy lovers plan for their wedding,
While all the world now seems so glad,
And is why myriad blooms are spreading!
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019

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Roper Avatar
January 4, 2020 at 8:59 PM
Congratulations on your win in Brian Strand’s contest, Evelyn. Hugs Eve
Buehler Avatar
January 4, 2020 at 9:20 PM
Thank you for your kind congratulations, Eve. Cheers, Evelyn
Dutta Avatar
December 31, 2019 at 11:14 PM
i admire your composition enriched in idea n expression. Happy New Year
Buehler Avatar
December 31, 2019 at 11:25 PM
Cheers, and Happy New Year to you, Anisha! Thank you for your wonderful comment. :)
Wolf Avatar
December 31, 2019 at 9:36 PM
Such nice turns of phrases -- Romantic red robin b/c a Don Juan...dignified toad -- enhance a wonderful poem with a warm message. Thank you, Evelyn and HNY 2020 to you and yours! Cheers, Gershon
Buehler Avatar
December 31, 2019 at 10:51 PM
You're very welcome! I'm delighted to hear such positive words, Gershon. Thank you very much, and a blessed and Happy New Year to you and yours as well! Cheers, Evelyn
Theraven Avatar
December 30, 2019 at 8:51 PM
Evelyn, This Rhyme captures the season of long days and natures bloom in wonderful detail. Very nice write to share this day. -Richard
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December 30, 2019 at 10:45 PM
Richard, I thank you sincerely for the lovely compliment. Blessings. -Evelyn
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