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1/6/2025 for Triolet Contrast Poetry Contest sponsored by Hilo Poet

To young and old, come death and birth, and both will need someone to care. A hello and goodbye to earth, to young and old, come death and birth. Let's recognize their special worth and gifts of love that both do share. To young and old, come death and birth and both will need someone to care.

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Date: 1/6/2025 8:28:00 PM
You chose your contrasting theme SO well. Fabulously done
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David Crandall
Date: 1/6/2025 8:59:00 PM
Thanks so much Andrea!
Date: 1/6/2025 7:45:00 PM
Really very nice. So simple but so logical
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David Crandall
Date: 1/6/2025 7:53:00 PM
Thanks Anisha! I'm glad you liked it, especially since, you're right, it is a bit simple.

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