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You'Ll Wonder Why

One day, you'll wonder why I ran away. One day, you'll wonder if you were the reason I couldn't stay. One day, you'll wonder why I cut. One day, you'll wonder if it was because you were so blunt. One day, you'll wonder why I would just stare. One day, you'll wonder if it was because you gave me that glare One day, you'll wonder why I cryed. One day you'll wonder if you were the reason I died. Trust me, when I'm gone forever, you'll wonder why. And everyone will know that you're the one that made me die.

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Hunter Ware

Date: 5/12/2010 3:00:00 PM

My bad. I dunno how I got him out of that, my mistake. My points are still valid.

Michaela Dowdy

Date: 5/12/2010 2:56:00 PM

this is about a guy hunter. try it being about my mom.

Hunter Ware

Date: 5/12/2010 2:42:00 PM

I do like this poem, but I do take issue with a couple pants. For one, I don't condone suicide. Another thing, is you blame "him" for your death. Which sounds (to me) like shoving blame onto someone else. Overall very nice.