'you Won'T Hurt Me No More'

Lady laughed manic, scrubbing hands
  blood stained fingers washed one another
The water, scalding, removed any trace
  that evil had transpired here
Her eyes wide and wild...recounting, remembering....
   ...reliving...rejoicing.  He lay dead, face down
 Vengence surged euphoric 
She whispered through smiling teeth
  'You won't hurt me no more'
 removing red spattered hand made dress
Naked she laughed and knelt to the splintered floor
  piece by piece she pried the wood
Fumbling with foreign tools
   Creating this corpses tomb
Rolling this limp, lifeless mass into the earth below
  Her bruised, weary face stared down
His eyes, one stabbed, met hers as she smiled 
  pouring lye over his hated face and limbs
Tossing the dress down to the crypt
  She grabbed the knife to follow it's path
thought better of it...keeping it gripped in hand
....a symbol of her new found strength, she couldn't part with it
  
Replacing planks of floorboards like jigsaw puzzle pieces
Hammering them in place to make a more familiar scene
  The table was pushed over to conceal the calvary
She sat...eyes wide and wild...to a dinner made for two
    she sighed...naked and relieved...slowly carving the meat

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009



Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

Date: 2/15/2009 9:45:00 AM
Steve, my brother.. this is some write..you are talent my friend and you displayed it very well in this piece..the last line is scary..LOL
Login to Reply
Date: 2/15/2009 9:41:00 AM
Nothing scarier than a woman scorn, very good write, loved every word of it.......Aleera
Login to Reply
Date: 2/15/2009 8:36:00 AM
Oooo...this is good fetter for the movies!! seems like a scene from a thriller!! Well done, Steve!! ~ Carrie
Login to Reply
Date: 2/14/2009 10:34:00 PM
This is really a good write. I liked it. He won't ever hurt her anymore and authorities won't find him...kind of a murder mystery.
Login to Reply
Get a Premium Membership
Get more exposure for your poetry and more features with a Premium Membership.
Book: Radiant Verses: A Journey Through Inspiring Poetry

Member Area

My Admin
Profile and Settings
Edit My Poems
Edit My Quotes
Edit My Short Stories
Edit My Articles
My Comments Inboxes
My Comments Outboxes
Soup Mail
Poetry Contests
Contest Results/Status
Followers
Poems of Poets I Follow
Friend Builder

Soup Social

Poetry Forum
New/Upcoming Features
The Wall
Soup Facebook Page
Who is Online
Link to Us

Member Poems

Poems - Top 100 New
Poems - Top 100 All-Time
Poems - Best
Poems - by Topic
Poems - New (All)
Poems - New (PM)
Poems - New by Poet
Poems - Read
Poems - Unread

Member Poets

Poets - Best New
Poets - New
Poets - Top 100 Most Poems
Poets - Top 100 Most Poems Recent
Poets - Top 100 Community
Poets - Top 100 Contest

Famous Poems

Famous Poems - African American
Famous Poems - Best
Famous Poems - Classical
Famous Poems - English
Famous Poems - Haiku
Famous Poems - Love
Famous Poems - Short
Famous Poems - Top 100

Famous Poets

Famous Poets - Living
Famous Poets - Most Popular
Famous Poets - Top 100
Famous Poets - Best
Famous Poets - Women
Famous Poets - African American
Famous Poets - Beat
Famous Poets - Cinquain
Famous Poets - Classical
Famous Poets - English
Famous Poets - Haiku
Famous Poets - Hindi
Famous Poets - Jewish
Famous Poets - Love
Famous Poets - Metaphysical
Famous Poets - Modern
Famous Poets - Punjabi
Famous Poets - Romantic
Famous Poets - Spanish
Famous Poets - Suicidal
Famous Poets - Urdu
Famous Poets - War

Poetry Resources

Anagrams
Bible
Book Store
Character Counter
Cliché Finder
Poetry Clichés
Common Words
Copyright Information
Grammar
Grammar Checker
Homonym
Homophones
How to Write a Poem
Lyrics
Love Poem Generator
New Poetic Forms
Plagiarism Checker
Poetics
Poetry Art
Publishing
Random Word Generator
Spell Checker
Store
What is Good Poetry?
Word Counter