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You Will Not Live Forever

You will not live forever And you do not have a soul There are no hells or heavens No charged punishments to scroll We do not keep on going When our ashes riddle urns There are no gods or saviors No exchanges or returns You will not live forever And you cannot sway the Fates There are no master captains Out beyond the crooked gates

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Hilda Greenhough

Date: 5/2/2024 3:33:00 PM

This is a welcome different take on the hereafter. Perhaps we have already gone to hell.

Brian Sambourne

Date: 4/29/2024 5:12:00 PM

Since our time is finite it is best the savour the daily joys that spring like blooms through sidewalk cracks. Thank you for this posting. Best wishes. Brian

Beata Agustin

Date: 3/21/2024 2:22:00 AM

Welcome to Poetry Soup. I welcome you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life."