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You Will Fail

"You" are trying to save me doing anything you can think of all because you care. But I have already made up my mind. When you see that "you" have failed "you" will turn around crying and walk away never to look back. I will then shed the last tears I will ever cry. Then silently say thank "you" and goodbye.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 8/31/2010 5:14:00 AM
An odd mix of emotion in there, I enjoyed reading your poem
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Date: 8/30/2010 4:26:00 AM
I would like to welcome you to PoetrySoup Chris. Wishing you the best in your writing endeavors. If you have questions please feel free to ask anyone here. We are all willing to help and if we don't know the answer we will find someone who does. Love, Carol
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Date: 8/29/2010 9:43:00 PM
good write, I enjoyed it
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Date: 8/29/2010 9:20:00 PM
This is very important to me. I cried just writing it
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