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You Weren'T Even There

Do not dare To form poetry of war If you weren't even there. Do not dare To pin the medal to an unblooded tunic. They have never shone in glory, Nor, even in reflected gore, Shown death's feast. It is not when death releases its rigid hold, And the jaws of those lying drop cold. It is when, with disbelief, They hear respect and platitudes, And the utterance of gratitude, And bleeding hearts are shown bare, By those who weren't even there. And the pals, all gone now. They marched in rank from the field, And looked on their lost years. No need for prayers, Or the false tears, As shed by those who weren't even there. Think on, lads, as you march past Tommy. Eyes right, See those who sent him. Eyes left, See the cost. Futures all lost. Job done. And the false medals dine with their host. They never stood in the lines. They never died on the mines. They never screamed at the 5.9's.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018




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Date: 2/21/2018 9:26:00 AM
Wow William! This is a deep and moving piece of work. Thank you. Coming from one who did not have the opportunity to serve, my gratitude goes far beyond platitudes. War must be awful.
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Date: 2/19/2018 1:45:00 AM
Hi Willian, it is a fantastic poem....I really like .. i also write a poem on the same idea but it is not of that worth. because i am not a professional poet nor an English... You describe it very beautifully.
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Date: 1/29/2018 2:43:00 PM
William, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun with this marvelous community. You'll find many friendly poets who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I TOO am ready to enjoy and follow you and your poetry if you'd like :) We are Lucky To Have you. Enjoy Poetry Soup 2018 :) Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@
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Terry Reeves
Date: 2/19/2018 4:12:00 PM
Really excellent with a spiritual core - who could write more.

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