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You Went Away

Another summer here alone why you left me so cold chilled to the bone it sinks in when i see you in stone I walk around in a daze forgetting the look on your face nothing fills my heart but empty space i showed you my darkest place They tell me that i will be okay but not today I cry from the last words i heard you say Living alone in this place i think of you so i can escape A place where i used to see you Happy and breathing but not anymore... A place where you died in pain It was a shame that you couldnt be saved This day i will remember because its the day that you went away

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 6/14/2012 12:31:00 PM
Congratulations on your win in P.D.'s "Simple Poems" contest Shayla. Love, Carol
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Shayla Dendinger
Date: 6/14/2012 9:40:00 PM
thank you :D
Date: 6/13/2012 7:43:00 AM
Shayla congrats on your win..David
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Shayla Dendinger
Date: 6/14/2012 9:40:00 PM
thank you
Date: 6/12/2012 11:28:00 AM
Congratulations on your poignant poem and win!!! Terry
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Shayla Dendinger
Date: 6/13/2012 7:38:00 AM
thank you
Date: 6/12/2012 9:26:00 AM
SHAYLA.. A wonderful congratulations with your awesome deep poem,... God bless~ XOX*PD
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Shayla Dendinger
Date: 6/13/2012 7:38:00 AM
thank you :)

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