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at the edge of the world I will disappear - poet

The edge of the world waits; the place I have chosen to disappear into the great unknown, knowing you may be there in that place; I'm hoping, praying, trusting with all my heart, you wait. The edge unknown, knowing you wait.

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Daniel Henry Rodgers

Date: 1/25/2024 4:15:00 PM

Dear Chetta, Your poem is a wondrous reflection on the intersection of longing and uncertainty. The imagery of disappearing into the great unknown, while hoping and trusting someone may be there, is both haunting and hopeful. Your words capture the delicate balance between vulnerability and resilience in matters of the heart. Thank you for sharing this beautifully introspective piece with us. - Blessings, Daniel

Sara Etgen-Baker

Date: 1/25/2024 2:48:00 PM

what a compelling and powerful poem. Such freedom in being on the unknown edge, knowing you wait. A powerful choice and commitment. Liked it.