You Touched My Heart

Oh how sweet and beautiful are the words
that you say to me, they stick to my soul
like honey to a bee.  They move me,
they soothe me, they let me live, for
it is you that I need and my heart
I will give.

You touched me like I never have
felt before, you start my heart breathing
so fast until I can hardly let go.
I feel your words like sand on a beach
they are still in my head and will never
decease.  Your words are so brand
new and alive, for they are the only
thing that is helping me to survive.

You touched my heart like no other I have
known, the way in which you love me
I wil never do you no harm.  Your words
is like an ocean running free, all I want
them to do is pour all over me.

You touched my heart like a child playing
with a toy, he love it so much because
it brings him so much joy. That is how 
you touch my heart, giving and bringing
me so much joy, it makes me feel like
a child with his new toy.

You touched my heart every day of my
life, that is why I do not care about all
the sacrifice. I wil do everything to make
you happy just as long as I know I am
the apple of your eye and that you will
do or say nothing to make me
cry.

You touched my heart from this day
forward, there can never be another
you because you are what I need and
it is me for you and you for me that
is the only way it is going to be.
you touched my heart.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Dome Avatar
February 4, 2013 at 2:20 PM
Wow!. Perfection. Original, beautiful and so visual. Love it so much. An all time fav for me. Lovely romantic piece. Well done. Thank you posting. Warm best wishes. Pete.
Christian Avatar
June 6, 2012 at 2:58 AM
aw that is beautifl, and thanks for yor kind comments on my poem god's beautiful creation. God bless you from diane
Ball Avatar
June 5, 2012 at 5:30 PM
Well said Shirley. Filled with love and well expressed. God Bless, JB
Timperley Avatar
May 14, 2012 at 10:57 AM
WOW!! This was exactly how I felt about my wife 43 years ago when I first met her. It still holds so very true today. Be blessed by God. I have been. Dave.
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May 13, 2012 at 12:45 PM
Beautiful words of love expressed, Shirley! God bless you and thanks for your kind comments this week. Hugs, Rhonda
Horne Avatar
May 13, 2012 at 7:33 AM
what a beautiful and loving tribute, Shirley
Cornwall Avatar
May 11, 2012 at 9:03 PM
Alovely writing you have made here..Patrick
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May 10, 2012 at 2:01 AM
Thank you for touching our hearts with your inspiring words!!! God bless you!
Wesley Avatar
May 8, 2012 at 2:29 PM
You touched my heart with this Shirley. Sweet words of love to comfort and heart needing a hiding place.
Horne Avatar
May 8, 2012 at 8:43 AM
what a beautiful romantic piece, Shirley
Williams Avatar
May 8, 2012 at 7:28 AM
Shirley, wow, powerful stuff..David
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May 7, 2012 at 2:09 AM
wonderfully deep poem, Shirley, i believe you will be touching lots of hearts with this once read. you certainly touch mine. harry
Duruaku Avatar
May 6, 2012 at 5:33 PM
you are just a very good poet,,,u made love sound sweet dear !
Sathasivam Avatar
May 6, 2012 at 3:06 AM
Your poem touched my heart. Excellent write and well penned. enjoyed. Ravi
Kendrick Avatar
May 5, 2012 at 8:15 AM
Enjoyed reading your passionate work..Yes, genuine love does that..I am glad that I chose this one to read this morn..Thanks for reading my work..Your presence at my work is uplifting..Sara
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May 4, 2012 at 12:08 AM
This touched my heart, lovely written Shirley.Love it. - oxox Anne-Lise
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