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You Touched My Heart

Oh how sweet and beautiful are the words that you say to me, they stick to my soul like honey to a bee. They move me, they soothe me, they let me live, for it is you that I need and my heart I will give. You touched me like I never have felt before, you start my heart breathing so fast until I can hardly let go. I feel your words like sand on a beach they are still in my head and will never decease. Your words are so brand new and alive, for they are the only thing that is helping me to survive. You touched my heart like no other I have known, the way in which you love me I wil never do you no harm. Your words is like an ocean running free, all I want them to do is pour all over me. You touched my heart like a child playing with a toy, he love it so much because it brings him so much joy. That is how you touch my heart, giving and bringing me so much joy, it makes me feel like a child with his new toy. You touched my heart every day of my life, that is why I do not care about all the sacrifice. I wil do everything to make you happy just as long as I know I am the apple of your eye and that you will do or say nothing to make me cry. You touched my heart from this day forward, there can never be another you because you are what I need and it is me for you and you for me that is the only way it is going to be. you touched my heart.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 2/4/2013 2:20:00 PM
Wow!. Perfection. Original, beautiful and so visual. Love it so much. An all time fav for me. Lovely romantic piece. Well done. Thank you posting. Warm best wishes. Pete.
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Date: 6/6/2012 2:58:00 AM
aw that is beautifl, and thanks for yor kind comments on my poem god's beautiful creation. God bless you from diane
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Date: 6/5/2012 5:30:00 PM
Well said Shirley. Filled with love and well expressed. God Bless, JB
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Date: 5/14/2012 10:57:00 AM
WOW!! This was exactly how I felt about my wife 43 years ago when I first met her. It still holds so very true today. Be blessed by God. I have been. Dave.
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Date: 5/13/2012 12:45:00 PM
Beautiful words of love expressed, Shirley! God bless you and thanks for your kind comments this week. Hugs, Rhonda
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Date: 5/13/2012 7:33:00 AM
what a beautiful and loving tribute, Shirley
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Date: 5/11/2012 9:03:00 PM
Alovely writing you have made here..Patrick
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Date: 5/10/2012 2:01:00 AM
Thank you for touching our hearts with your inspiring words!!! God bless you!
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Date: 5/8/2012 2:29:00 PM
You touched my heart with this Shirley. Sweet words of love to comfort and heart needing a hiding place.
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Date: 5/8/2012 8:43:00 AM
what a beautiful romantic piece, Shirley
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Date: 5/8/2012 7:28:00 AM
Shirley, wow, powerful stuff..David
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Date: 5/7/2012 2:09:00 AM
wonderfully deep poem, Shirley, i believe you will be touching lots of hearts with this once read. you certainly touch mine. harry
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Date: 5/6/2012 5:33:00 PM
you are just a very good poet,,,u made love sound sweet dear !
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Date: 5/6/2012 3:06:00 AM
Your poem touched my heart. Excellent write and well penned. enjoyed. Ravi
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Date: 5/5/2012 8:15:00 AM
Enjoyed reading your passionate work..Yes, genuine love does that..I am glad that I chose this one to read this morn..Thanks for reading my work..Your presence at my work is uplifting..Sara
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Date: 5/4/2012 12:08:00 AM
This touched my heart, lovely written Shirley.Love it. - oxox Anne-Lise
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