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You Took It

i picture your face eyes bluer than the skies on a sunny day smile so amazing i catch my breath when ever i see it but then i remember you took it i remember your arms wrapped tight around me theres never been a time in my life that ive felt more special but then i remember you took it i still hear your voice rough and weak almost like you were in pain all of the time and i loved it but then i remeber you took it i relive the last moments i had with you your lips on my cheek my lips my forehead i love you but then i remember you took that to

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Date: 11/30/2009 12:57:00 PM
Keep writing your doing good.
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Date: 11/24/2009 11:52:00 AM
Another sad one.
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Book: Shattered Sighs