You Took It

i picture your face
eyes bluer than 
the skies on a sunny day
smile so amazing i catch my breath
when ever i see it
but then i remember 
you took it

i remember your arms
wrapped tight around me
theres never been 
a time in my life 
that ive felt more special
but then i remember 
you took it

i still hear your voice
rough and weak 
almost like you were in pain
all of the time
and i loved it
but then i remeber
you took it

i relive the last moments
i had with you
your lips on my cheek
my lips my forehead 
i love you
but then i remember 
you took that to
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Bono Avatar
November 30, 2009 at 12:57 PM
Keep writing your doing good.
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November 24, 2009 at 11:52 AM
Another sad one.
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