You tend to smile within your sleep

I like that when I hold your hand, you tend to smile within your sleep
We took a shot at something wonderful; that also became something deep
Life becomes a castle; you are its strongest hold, my beloved keep
Feeling loved by you, I found a newly created reason to take a defining leap
Scorching from a burning Deep; I Leap, and Keep Feeling so much; when We hold a part of Life; by smiling in our Sleep
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February 14, 2024 at 4:46 PM
Sweet- lovely thoughts, may your sleep be sweet-
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February 14, 2024 at 8:36 PM
This was my attempt to capture the feeling of being with someone at the most vulnerable of moments. While conceding vulnerability to those moments. Respectfully A.S.
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