You Take Away Me From the Light...

You take away me from the light
into the dusk of faceless streets.
We see faint traces of the bright,
road lamps are all of a sudden lit.

You fell in company with me
so as to come up to the point.
We bypass dirty roadside sleet
and soon walk out of the crossroad.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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June 20, 2009 at 6:31 AM
Such a melancholy feel to this wonderful poem. Well done...Carrie
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