Brenda Chiri Poet Rhyme

You Stole

My beating heart beats faster
How you take my breath away
You've transformed my disaster
Changing my life in many ways

Bringing a smile to my red lips
And laughter again to my soul
Making my sadness begin to slip
My heart you seem to have stole

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John Gondolf August 12, 2019 at 8:47 AM Everybody needs someone like this in their life. Nicely penned, Bren. All my best to you. Hugs, John Brenda Chiri August 12, 2019 at 11:11 AM Well when I find one I will let you know John! Haha! I'm kinda liking my single life right now and in no hurry because if it's meant to be it will be!;) thanks John!;)

Richard Lamoureux August 12, 2019 at 8:33 AM He sounds like the preferred kind of thief. Hugs Rick. Brenda Chiri August 12, 2019 at 11:10 AM Haha! And when I find him I'm sure he will be!;) thank Rick!:)

Gordon Mcconnell August 12, 2019 at 3:08 AM Such a lovely penned write Brenda, as John says it just rolls off the tongue. Your rhyme is really sounding great, so inspiring! Brenda Chiri August 12, 2019 at 11:09 AM Thank you so much Gordon! Your words are appreciated!;)

John Fleming August 6, 2019 at 12:24 PM This just rolls off the tongue in a most delightful and melodious sort of way...it would make a lovely little poem to put on the inside of a Valentines card, methinks. I like the upbeat and happy feel to it all. Fondest thoughts, Brenda. :) john Brenda Chiri August 11, 2019 at 11:50 AM Ahh thx John! What would I do if I didn't get your feedback!;) All my affection!;)