You Stole

My beating heart beats faster How you take my breath away You've transformed my disaster Changing my life in many ways Bringing a smile to my red lips And laughter again to my soul Making my sadness begin to slip My heart you seem to have stole

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John Gondolf

Date: 8/12/2019 8:47:00 AM

Everybody needs someone like this in their life. Nicely penned, Bren. All my best to you. Hugs, John

Brenda Chiri
Date: 8/12/2019 11:11:00 AM

Well when I find one I will let you know John! Haha! I'm kinda liking my single life right now and in no hurry because if it's meant to be it will be!;) thanks John!;)

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 8/12/2019 8:33:00 AM

He sounds like the preferred kind of thief. Hugs Rick.

Brenda Chiri
Date: 8/12/2019 11:10:00 AM

Haha! And when I find him I'm sure he will be!;) thank Rick!:)

Gordon Mcconnell

Date: 8/12/2019 3:08:00 AM

Such a lovely penned write Brenda, as John says it just rolls off the tongue. Your rhyme is really sounding great, so inspiring!

Brenda Chiri
Date: 8/12/2019 11:09:00 AM

Thank you so much Gordon! Your words are appreciated!;)

John Fleming

Date: 8/6/2019 12:24:00 PM

This just rolls off the tongue in a most delightful and melodious sort of way...it would make a lovely little poem to put on the inside of a Valentines card, methinks. I like the upbeat and happy feel to it all. Fondest thoughts, Brenda. :) john

Brenda Chiri
Date: 8/11/2019 11:50:00 AM

Ahh thx John! What would I do if I didn't get your feedback!;) All my affection!;)